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Labels: My own fiction
nice ending.just a fine way to wrap it all up.
get it read by your mum,or whoever else to edit them,print a few copies and send to the people that "matters". and ur on ur way to stardom!hoho XD
Your mom is a writer? wow..
Happy ending? hehehe
Ehh bukan2 silap XD.
My mom is not a writer,tp dye jumpa org yg boleh edit cerita ni XD.Org tu
writer . hhehe.My mom is a teacher XD
@Clive My mom found a writer who can edit this story! :D
Owhh..wah...Firzanah, boleh saya nak cerita awak ni??
Sebenarnya ni stereotype yg belum di-edit.byk kesalahan XDD aaa malu. lpas sy edit bru sy email awak :)
like the ending and the story too..good work! keep on writing k!
Yay thanks so much! :D heee :3
Terharu :')
hm, the ending is something....
Finally, my guess was right !! Im so excited. haha :p
Do another story please? :(
A bit twist but It is a good story. :-)
@Ayuni=Something? hehehe XD
@Lisa= yes,haha.Do another story?
Hmm maybe when I got things to write
ehehehe XD
@Shafiq : My head can't think relevantly sometimes so there
are some twisting parts hehe.
Thanks for reading :D
i dont know why, i feel sad to read the ending.
berair mata ni kot..huhu.
i love this story very much, liselle.
touched my heart.
cudi ni macam the person yang akan sampaikan last words barry kat ayah dia..
and she succeeded...:')
nice ending, so meaningful, means that we need to treasure our life, never give up just because a small matter, right? =)
i wish you'll write another story..=D
good luck and keep on writing! may you become a real novelist someday! =D...go go liselle!!
Wow,thx so much you guys waaah terharu!! Thanks for wishing me and
give me the strength to continue writing! yeah!! I stayed up for 3 night for this :) hehehe
I luv read fanfiction @ fanfiction.net.hope u can bring a new one.this story is really good. :)
Hehe,I've heard of that before.
Thx for reading :).I'll keep working for new ideas
after u da edit,print it out and bind the book with illustration.
and trust me when i say this, 10 years from now when u go back to ur earlier works,u cannot help but smiling all the time reading 'em.
hehe :D
goood one:D
btw, suka bila masuk blog ni rasa mcm tgk crita kartun pun ada HAHA!cute:D
oh my,i have missed a lot.went to the the first and read every each part.
good story!
it will be even better with some editing here and there. :)
maybe you can try writing in wattpad! :D
Btw i think in one part you mistakenly wrote 'emily' instead of 'Laura'.do not remember which part.sorry :x
p/s i'm little dolphin
@Clive= I'm working on it,don't worry
XD
@Story= thx for dropping by
@H.s= yeah! thx for telling me! uhuhu
I found a really awesome editor to edit this story thx so much for reading :)
pheww.. finally.. nice ending! :):)
is there any story for me to read? now i'm so stressed.. final exam is coming.. arghh!!
p/s : please cont ur writing okey..^^
Sure,but have you read a funny story
that I wrote before? hehe
Tissue please!!! v.v,
Cudi can't accept the fact that Barry was dead... so do I D;
Haaaiz... please don't be a fool or stupid just because of love! But mistake is okay...
"Barry! Save me! I want to commit a suicide now,hurry before I jump!" <--- man!!! -sheds tears-
Liselle, good work. If Roger do exist, he must be proud of you. So proud of you ( ;
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