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Liselle Moncherie



Wednesday, April 18, 2012 @ 1:21 AM  |  29 Comment(s)


There was a girl,who have no emotions...
No one can know how she feels,
Whether she feels happy or sad....
She's the kid who no one ever cares about...
Everyone likes to say bad things about her even though they never talk to her,
Everyone likes to tell other people that she's crazy and weird,
Everyone is avoiding her...no one likes her,
Only a few people that dare to approach her and soon know
The REAL her...she's not like everyone talks about she's normal only didn't talk much.
But then only few people who understands her......so then they become her true friends...

One day,her mother was very disappointed with her,everything that she's done seems to be wrong...
Her mother ask her "Can't you feel anything?Can't you feel anything at all??"
"I felt nothing..."she answered
"Don't you know that I cried...I cried for you...Why can't you feel what I feel about you?"
Her mother started to shake her.....but there were no tears shed from her dark grey eyes...
Her eyes never shine...
Her face has never shown any emotions,
Her eyes are like Porcelain Doll's eyes...staring at the emptiness.
Her heart was nothing but a dust that once crushed by everyone
Even her mother thought that she's nothing but an emptiness...she had no soul...

She was different...
She stays awake at night ,
Sleeps when daylight,

Night is when she had the time to free her mind
Night is all when the magic happens,
Night is when she left her house....and she found herself freedom from the sick-minded people.

Night loves her too,
Night gave her stars
Night gave her the moon
Night gave her fireflies that flies around her.
Night gave her dancing lightnings that strike the same place over and over again.
Night was magic....until....her heart stop beating...her heart stop beating....her heart stop beating.



At the Foxtail Field where she was gazing at the stars...shining so bright...brighter than an Aeroplane tail...She smiled and closed her eyes...that's when her heart stop beating...and that's the first and the last time that her face was actually smiling....and then a drop of tears that hasn't gone dry from her left cheek...She's gone.The soul of the girl that has no heart has gone forever.....No one will talk about her anymore...God loves her more.






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Blogger Lady Windsor SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 1:50 AM  

I guess this is a fiction...well done dear. U have talent to be a writer...believe me...:) keep reading and writing..


Blogger zubect SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 2:29 AM  

dear, u really have the talent to be a writer. lagipown awk mmg nak jdi writer kan, study hard and cepat2 jd penulis yg boleh membanggakan Malaysia k? hehee


Blogger Mr.Clive SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 6:27 AM  

is this something you're currently working on???do tell do tell! :)


Blogger aku HaniAsyira SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 6:36 AM  

fuhhhh,, it is synopsis about ur new story or it just finished like that?? =)


Blogger Shafiq SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 9:12 AM  

I wonder is this just a synopsis or the complete story...hehehehe


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 9:15 AM  

@Lady W= heheh it's fiction :).Ohoho thx so much~ I hope that you'll become a great novelist my dear friend :DD <3


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 9:19 AM  

@Zubect= Thx :D hewhew yeah that's what I always dream to be^^
InsyaAllah suatu hari nanti akan membangga kn M'sia :DD <3


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 9:22 AM  

@Mr Clive=Heheh not really it's just an expression from the girl that has no heart...hehehe well let's get back to our normal lives shall we?


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 9:23 AM  

@Hani= It's just finish like that..no more to be continue XDD hehehe just an expression from the girl that has no heart...she's really exist you know XDDD


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 9:24 AM  

@Shafiq= It's the complete story bro :D


Blogger kay_are SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 9:32 AM  

like beast said .. Fiction!! memang nice. cite ni nampak macam menarik.. betul2.. tak kenal maka tak cinta.. kenal pun tak, tapi sukati tuduh macam2. tak betul r tu..


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 10:55 AM  

@kay_Are= waah minat K-pop hehehe
Hehe tak kenal maka tak cinta
tak cinta maka tak kenal
marilah bersuai kenal XDD
Hehehe.Biasalah org nmpk pelik skit semua nk cerita.


Blogger aku HaniAsyira SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 1:08 PM  

owh,, somebody else that still alive but think she is dead???

just curious to know.. weeee~~ ;P

may Allah bless u always.. =)


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 1:18 PM  

Ohohoho my darling she's Resting In Piece now.Means that she's really gone.for short...DIED.Hehehe have a nice day and May Allah bless you always^^ :D


Blogger HeNRieTTa JoSe SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 1:28 PM  

oh my.....i wanna cry....felt so sorry to the girl....


Blogger littledolphin SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 1:37 PM  

i used to be this kind of girl before.

am wondering, what's the cause of her death?

p/s continue posting new stories ya! :)


Blogger nedy. SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 1:38 PM  

Jaja, cerita betul ke ni? hehehe. keep writing babe ! i miss you xx


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 3:43 PM  

@Henrietta= She's just a fiction my dear :)


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 3:45 PM  

@Littledolphin= C.O.D...God loves her more,she sleeps forever...nature cause hehe.Yeshh! I will continue writing :D


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 3:46 PM  

@Nedy= No darling it's just a fiction :D.Hehe I miss you too^^ girl! :D


Blogger Boni JLL3 SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 8:35 PM  

hahaha..kata wordless wednesday?? tapi banyak je perkataan tu.hehehehe


Blogger CaDLyNN SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 8:36 PM  

wow..ade bakatla liselle..teruskan :)


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 8:47 PM  

@Bro Boni= Ehehe sy tulis Wordfull maknanya penuh dgn perkataan :D hewhew


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 18, 2012 at 8:49 PM  

@Cadlynn= ehehe thx so much kak Lynn :DDD


Blogger 49 SAID ON April 19, 2012 at 6:25 PM  

wow! thats the only word


Blogger Liselle MonCherie SAID ON April 19, 2012 at 6:34 PM  

I typed WORDFULL not WORDLESS


Blogger steffany daph SAID ON April 19, 2012 at 7:39 PM  

pergh,,, respect! that was nice. :D what happen to that girl actually in the end? did she kill herself? i mean based on the words " that's when her heart stop beating'. (: HaVe A nIcE D@y!


Blogger Teenager Housemaid SAID ON April 21, 2012 at 2:51 PM  

=')

somehow i can feel and related to this story...:')

this is a beautiful emi]otional story... i love this, liselle,,,

u r so good in writing! please keep on writing..:)


Blogger Miss Purple SAID ON April 25, 2012 at 1:18 PM  

nice writing, i can feel some emotion there =D

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