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Liselle Moncherie



Wednesday, February 29, 2012 @ 11:28 AM  |  36 Comment(s)

Mysterious Boxer under the hoodie!
*Wordfull Wednesday*

Anger is a fire that can't be extinguish with water or even an ABC fire extinguisher....Yesterday was a tough day.A fight between and a guy..with 152 cm girl.He used to be somebody that I used to know...

A friendly guy
A very patient guy
A very gentle guy
A very handsome guy
A Gentlemen
An animal lover

More like a guy friend at first but then things change,he dumped his girlfriend so he can be with me.Guilty?
I feel guilty for taking someone else's.I can't say that it's not my fault,but K that approached me first.He introduced me to his girlfriend and ever since that,he kept complaining about his girlfriend to me....and he got bored with her.I don't know what to do and only listened to his complaints

"I get bored with her,I mean I have to call her everyday...and ....".We always feel excited when we start seeing each other and that was the beginning of our relationship<----actually it was a secret relationship,no one knows about our relationship.I didn't judge K by his looks although it made me starstruck each time...hehehe but he's a really nice person outside and inside...only he just have many spaces for other girls.

Now,I felt like "Sorry Barbie,Ken Is mine!",his girlfriend loves barbie dolls

K has a very attractive personality,most girls are charmed by him......including me.He has a bad life,his mom had to use a wheelchair,she was paralysed after an accident.His dad?He ran away after seeing his mom was paralysed...he was too afraid.K live with his mom and his sister already has a family of her own.Everyday K have to clean the house and cook.I accept the situation,and I understand the things that he had to do.Whenever there's a girl that told him that she likes him,he would tell me that "I said to her NO! because I have you. and I'll always choose you."

Time went by,it been almost 3 weeks that I haven't heard any news of him,I was worried that something might could happen to his mom or even him,so I decided to check on him,but what suprised me that I saw him talking with 2 girls and they were laughing and having fun.He saw me and quickly pretend that he didn't even know them....

"I was worried about you,but I guess I don't have to worry anymore....Say hi to your mom,bye!" there was I saying goodbye to the person that I used to love....

"No...wait I can explain...."<------Explain what?


So now he has a new girlfriend,she is so pretty! Even I could fall for her..this is not sarcasm XD.
He told me that "I used to be happy with you,really I mean it!"

DUSH!

My knuckles reached his cheekbone...me go gangsta

Almost hit the handsome nose......K I'm sorry...now you just somebody that I used to know...do make a right choice,I'm a loner now.I'm happy being alone with my friends,my heart has been turned to dust,broken shattered.

A paper heart can be cut
A glass heart can be broken
A steel heart can be melt.

This photo is fake~ Meet Kyle Patrick *Click 5 vocalist*
No.he's not K




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Tuesday, February 28, 2012 @ 3:00 PM  |  25 Comment(s)


If the Devil wears Prada then the Angel is wearing....?

A.Dolce Gabbana
B.Chanel
C.DKNY
D.Gucci

Hehe,fashion is like technology,always being updated in almost every second.We've heard about gadget maniacs.Now it's the Fashionistas turn to go Gaga for fashion XD.I know lots of pretty girls out there are going vintage~back to the 50's and 60's with polka dots and vintage flowers.As for me,I'm not so girlish when it comes to fashion....I know my blog looks girlish..but when it comes to outfits....Na-uh!

Mike Posner and Kanye West are 2 of my fave singers,their styles really get along with me :D
Do you know Mike Posner? The singer who sang the song that used to hit the charts "Cooler than Me".
hehe and Kanye West who....grabbed Taylor Swift's award during the ceremony...okay that was too over.
I love to see Kanye West's shoes,they are awesome and he's the one who "introduced" me to Supra.

Just came out from the Box!


I Love em'

I got few jackets collection :) I'm a Jacket Jaqueline :D!

 A Furry Hoodie and A Mini Trench Coat
About the hanger.....my parents bought that that's why it has vintage flowers..I want a plain one XD

 An Argyle Hoodie and A Varsity Jacket

A leather Jacket that my dad gave me :D

Unfortunately my brother is not interested with fashion at all and I always encourage him to be more stylish! He always slippers but as long as he's comfortable then,it's fine XD. So Thanks Mike Posner and Kanye West.Your fashion is a legacy! :D  WEST+POSNER= WESNER :)

Ps:/ This is a scheduled post of mine.My lappy is away for almost 4 days or...a week!So,I am using my bro's laptop.....it's  kinda..old,and I will Blog Crossing to your blogs! Keep in touch Tata.





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Monday, February 27, 2012 @ 2:39 PM  |  34 Comment(s)


In order to fulfill Mr Clive and Miss Purple requests to blog about my driving lesson,so here it is! Hehe

Yesterday was my first day that I lay my hands on the steering.Which steering?The mini red Kancil that belongs to Mr Latif! hehe he happened to be my car instructor,before my lesson started it was raining heavily and I was so nervous! I never met Mr Latif before so I waited under a canopy for the students. Nobody was there except me,and suddenly a vibrant red coloured Kancil parked in front me<----this is not Cudi's vigdis XD.

A middle aged man came out from the car with sunglasses,he smiled at me and ask "Adik nak belajar kereta kan? Dengan siapa?"

Me: A'ah,dgn Encik Latif

Mr L: Meh,jom

Me:Oh! Okay

Mr L: Mula2 kita kne betul kan seat,cermin safety belt ....and so on XD

Me: Oh okay paham2

Mr L: Nak cuba bawak?

Me: Umm ,takpe lah

Mr L: Eh,mestilah kne try baru la best.Tak best klu tgok je.

So,we changed our seats after we stopped in the driving circuit.I followed his instruction carefully and then things become kinda bumpy.I was too concentrated when I was driving until I didn't listen to what he says. I almost hit the divider,the stop sign and the round about!

Mr L:Eh,awak bawak kereta ni sorang-sorang ek?Kita bawak kereta mesti pikir mana nk pergi.Awk ni tak pikir mana awk nk pergi.

Me:Eh tak tak,sorry-sorry.Sy mintak maaf Encik Latif....

Mr L: Okay,ini baru first time,nasib baik awk dpt saya,klu instructor lain mesti dah mencarut-carut dah ni.

Me:Hmm...

So I had problems with the clutch and the car's engine always on and off about more than 10 times,until Mr Latif seemed very upset and I can't deal with people,then he asked me to stop for a while.He went outside to smoke for 5 minutes.I got to admit,he is a very patient man!Huhu :'(

Mr L:Okay jgn usik apa2,nyawa sy nk hbis dah ni.

Me:Ok..

Mr L went back inside the car and start asking me.

Mr L: Ayah kerja apa?Ni kt rumah buat ape je?

Me: Ayah sy ex navy,sy menulis.

Mr L: Hah?

Me:Sy menulis

Mr L:Ohh..

So I guess he can sense my problem now,my body was driving and my mind seems to fly around.So yeah I learnt my lessons! I have a problem when it comes "Paying attention" to certain things that I don't find it interesting.

When it almost 2 hours that I spent on driving lesson,he asked me to park the car where he parked before,in front of the canopy.

Me:Encik Latif sy mintak maaf sgt2

Mr L: Oh takpe takpe ini baru first time,kita jumpa lagi minggu depan.Kita kne belajar dr kesilapan,jgn ulang lagi minggu depan okay?

Me:Umm,ok.

The conclusion is! My driving lesson is a nightmare and because of my height....I have to wear Supra to reach the clutch next time. Huhu

Oh and Thank You Mr Clive for picking me as one of the winner for your CPR Program :D!!

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@ 12:53 AM  |  20 Comment(s)

I've been Tagged by this sweetest star! Tastier star than Honey Star,Miss Starshine! You are a shooting star :)!

I guess I'm not really good to write about myself,that's the hardest thing ever! Okay so let's begin :D


Who am I?

Real name : Nur Firzanah
Nickname : Liselle Moncherie *Not so nick afterall
Zodiac : Geminine :D
Male or Female : Female
Elementary school(s) : Sk Dato' Seri Kamaruddin
High school(s) : SMK(A) Slim River,SMK Seri Manjung
College : If I'm lucky to get some offers :)
Hair colour : Asians Hair Colour,I never heard any asians have blonde hair colour XD
Tall or short : Short! 152 cm
Relationship status : Singlet!

Sweats or jeans : Jeans rocks!
Phone or camera : My camera is dusty,so phone rules!
Health freak : I'm not really sure about this :P
Orange or apple : See my blog link,it's Apple and Cherry,but in this case is Apple :) 
Do you have crush on someone : No!
Eat or drink : Drink! but still I'm fat XD
Silent or noisy : Silent outside,noisy inside
Pepsi or coke : 100 plus! <-----Duh not an option XD


Have You Ever

Been in plane : Yes when I was 9 months old,and then 2 years old,last when I was 3 yrs old
Been in relationship : yes
Been in car accident : No~
Been in a prison :Nope,my hostel is not a prison but I have many Stripes T-shirt
*Prison Shirts*


First ?

First piercing : I don't have any piercing
First best friend : Ikhwan! We met when I was 3 and he was 5
First award: When I was 8,got the 2nd Place in End of The Year Exam
First crush : Pfft,please they have turned into dorks
First word :The first came out from my mouth is
"Bapak"

Last ?

Last beverage : Nescafe
Last person you talked to in person : Encik Latif,my driving Instructor
Last person you texted : Ili Shaheera
Last person you watched a movie with : Alone
Last food you ate : Tom Yam Beehun
Last movie you watched : Gulliver's Travel
Last song you listened : T.H.E The Hardest Ever by Will.i.am Feat J.Lo and Mick Jagger
Last thing you bought : I can't remember.
Last person you hugged : My mom,every night :)

Favourites

Food : Tom Yam Beehun :D
Drink : Nescafe
Cartoons : Coraline,Chowder,Lulu,Totally Spies,Madeline,Toys Story,Bugs Bunny...etc
Flower : I don't have any specific flowers that I like but my mom is a fanatic of roses
Animal : Cats,Lions,Tigers and all the feline family.
Movies : TRON Legacy,Coraline,Rush Hour,Beverly Cops,Ghostbusters,Home Alone 1&2 *only,
Back to the future series
Colour(s) : Blue and pastel colours
Subject(s) : Biology,English

Have You Ever ( put an X in the bracket if yes )

[ X ] Fell in love with someone
[ X ] Celebrated birthday party
[ X ] Had your heart broken
[ X ] Went over the minutes texts on your cell phone
[ X ] Turned someone down

So this is it.

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Sunday, February 26, 2012 @ 9:24 PM  |  28 Comment(s)


Hello there dudes and dudettes,on this wonderful spectacular Sunday Night marks my 200th post!
This post is dedicated to all of my readers that always be there to support me writing,although after I reread the Bicycle and found numerous grammar and grandpapa mistakes...a little bit embarrassing,hehehe


Me love you!

I'm a 17 1/2 year old kid who write carelessly XD.The ideas just come like bullets from a machine gun so I was rushing to finish them all. Your comments are really inspiring,they make me feel touched and my spirit of writing are burning to write more and more.Hopefully that when my spirit are burning it doesn't burn my laptop too,heheh :P.Some readers contacted me through FB,and they read the bicycle from the beginning until the end,so thank you so much guys! <3 :').

When I first wrote about the bicycle,I was thinking that who might be reading this story?The story is just too long,and it might get bored,but when I read the comments that you guys posted,I decided to continue the story.We always have to finish what we started right?

These are the special people that inspire me to continue to write and you guys are the fuel of my spirit!
My Diesels! :D

Miss M,You inspired me to write about Cudi
Mr Clive and LisaYou give me the spirit and encouragement
Miss Purple,Shafiq,and CappuccinoYou give me the strength to keep on writing
Mira Mohamed,Little Dolphin,Norieda and AyuniYou give me the support that I need

Oh and thanks to you guys,my page just hit over 20,000 :D. Uhuhu only god can repay you.
Lots of love from Liselle Moncherie.Welcoming you to my F.L.O.G, Firzanah's Letter Of Gratitude :)




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Saturday, February 25, 2012 @ 5:01 PM  |  27 Comment(s)



Cudi was confused; she could not believe the sheriff’s words. Barry has been with her every morning ,and always there to catch her when she falls riding Vigdis. She hold her tears until the sheriff drove off from the bridge.Her tears fall on her bicycle seat,Cudi took a long stare at Vigdis,she knew that she must seek the truth,is the Barry that she met is the real Barry Deaver or just a stranger  who claimed himself as Barry,by using Barry Deaver’s identity? .She puts her legs on the paddle and start cycling to the town’s public library .She never cycle Vigdis as fast the wind before but this time,they both were breaking the wind .Her heart was thumping wildly,she’s afraid that she might be losing her mind to believe that Barry is ever existed.

“Excuse me.I need to find an information about….a suicide case that happened 2 years ago at the bridge .Can you help me?” Cudi asked the librarian politely.

“Oh,yes I can help you with that,there’s an article about Barry Deaver.He jumped off the bridge with his bicycle.The article is in the library archives.Let me get it for you.”The librarian tried to assist Cudi

SATURDAY- A 23 year old “Lover Boy” was found dead at the Swanwick Lake .The sheriff concluded that it was a suicide after they found a suicide note handwritten by the victim,Barry Joseph Deaver.His body was found  fully dressed and the Sheriff Department also found a yellow bicycle, they believe that it belongs to the victim.The victim’s father Gary John Deaver  was frustrated with his son’s death.”He’s my only son…I’ve lost everything”said Barry’s father after the press interviewed him at his residence.The funeral will be held on Tuesday at Serenity Soul Cemetery.
-source Gibson

There’s a picture of Barry in the newspaper article,wearing a plaid shirt just like he used to wear everyday when he meets Cudi.The sheriff’s words were right,Barry was dead.The guy whom she met is the real Barry,not a stranger who regarded himself as Barry like Cudi expected to be.He is real and used to exist in this world but now he’s gone.He is not an imagination.Cudi left the library after she learns the truth that Barry is gone.

She cycled to every place that she used to practice with Barry.The foxtail field and the the abandoned Peabody’s farm.She went back to the bench where Barry likes to sit near the bridge.Cudi climbed the bridge’s beam just like she did on the first day she met Barry.

“Barry! Save me! I want to commit a suicide now,hurry before I jump!”Cudi screamed  until the top of her lungs.She was hoping that Barry would stop her,just like before.This time,no one tries to stop her,Barry wasn’t there anymore.Cudi returned to her cabin late that evening.Terri was very worried because Cudi promised to return in the afternoon.Cudi locked herself in her room,she continues to write about “Bruce” and “Laura”.On the 50th page and she changed the ending…

“Laura was surprised after seeing Bruce wearing a white tuxedo that morning,unlike every day,he used to wear the same clothes but on that day he decidde to propose Laura to be his one true love.Laura said yes and they  tie a knot a week after.That’s the story of a lady from the big apple marries a stranger who eventually becomes her husband.The guy from the orange county.If it’s not because of the bicyle and Laura’s weakness,they might not be together or remain being strangers like before."

Cudi finally finished her novel.500 pages of recorded moments of Barry and herself. Terri was still working on typing the last chapter.It is the time that they have to get back to New York,the big apple city that doesn’t grows apples.Cudi packed her things after Terri finished  her typing work.She puts Barry’s button in her purse,the button that holds many memories and also mysteries.A pick-up service was called to bring Vigdis and their baggage back to New York.

Before the pick- up service arrives,Cudi took one last cycle with Vigdis on the orange county ground.A handwritten novel was in her wicker basket,she wanted to give the original novel to Barry’s father.Cudi went to Deaver’s Bicycle Store,and meets Gary Deaver.

“I would like you to have this,Barry’s last words was in this novel.I want you to keep it,Barry wished that he could talk to you but..he couldn’t .He loves you Mr Deaver and I know you do too .Goodbye .” said Cudi.She continues her last trip to Serenity Soul Cemetery,where Barry’s body were buried.

“Barry Joseph Deaver”
1987-2010
“Thank you Barry for everything”
There are words that we can derived from Bicycle
By
Bye
Bile
Cycle

But only 2 words that  are needed in this story Bye and Cycle.Life is a cycle,sometimes we say HI and sometimes we have to say BYE.
~The End~


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@ 1:37 AM  |  9 Comment(s)



Night falling its curtain, the sun has ended its show. It’s the time for the stars and the moon to perform on the sky’s stage.

“Cudi Messer! I’ve been try to reach you for almost 3 weeks and where have you been?! Giving up already? I know you’re there so answer me!” a furious voice came out from Cudi’s answer machine.She could not hold her anger anymore so she picks up the call;

“Yes Mr Kingsley? For your information I finished writing  450 pages and 50 more pages to go.I don’t care how many pages that you want me to write because this is my book ,coming out from my own head and not yours.When I said 500 pages it goes 500 not more or lesser than that.You got me? And 1 more thing,I purposely unplugged the phone cord so you won’t be disturbing me while I’m working. Goodbye!”

She hung  up the phone,Terri was terrified with after she listened the way  Cudi spoke to Roger with rage of fire .Cudi went upstairs,She doesn’t want to be on her writing desk when she’s angry. Anger could spoil the story,so she lie down on her bed and cover her face with a pillow and then fast asleep. Cudi always manage to control her anger with sleeping and sometimes she has to break something until she feels better.People who doesn’t want to share their dark story always have a very “Silent” way to express certain feelings.

Morning tells the moon that show time is over, it’s the time for the sun to heat things up.
Terri didn’t wake up early as usual she had a flu after she was collecting the laundry when it rained yesterday,Cudi had to make breakfast  on her own. She made Terri’s favourite, Omelette  served with mushroom sauce and two cups of latte.She opened the fridge and found out that they had ran out of apples.Cudi wrote a note to tell Terri that she’s gone to town to look for some groceries and she will return  in the afternoon.

Cudi happily cycled  Vigdis down the lane,crossing the bridge until she arrives at the farmer’s market.She bought  two dozen of apples and a carton of milk, she bumped into Barry’s dad bicycle store.She wanted to meet Barry and his dad,so she walked into the store.

“Good morning Miss,how may I assist you?Is there something wrong with your bicycle I presumed?”asked Mr Deaver.

“Oh,good morning Mr Deaver,there’s nothing wrong with my bicycle.Vigdis is just fine,I’m here to see you and Barry.Is he around?” Cudi asked Mr Deaver.

“I’m sorry to tell you,Barry is gone…. And he’s never coming back.”Mr Deaver replied.

“It didn’t went well I guess,I’m very sorry to interrupt your family issues and I don’t mean to be nosy.Well I better go now,Tata Mr Deaver have a good day.”said Cudy with frustration.

Mr Deaver didn’t have the chance to finish his sentence before Cudi left his shop in a hurry.

“He is such a coward,I thought he won’t be leaving town without talking to his dad no wonder he acted so strange yesterdady.How pathetic!”Cudi talked to herself while putting  the groceries in the wicker basket at Vigdis’s  front side.She cycled in a very angry mood,she wanted to confront Barry and gave him a piece of her mind.She stopped at a bench where Barry used to sit every morning and hoping that Barry would show up.Cudi waited for Barry but after a while there is still no sign of that mystery man who wears the same clothes every single day.

“Waiting for someone Miss Messer?” a question came from a sheriff who passed the bridge with his patrol car.

“Yes,I’m waiting for Barry Deaver,do you happen to know him or seen him before?asked Cudi.

“I’m sorry Miss Messer,Barry has been dead for 2 years.He died in the lake.We found him with his bicyle,it was a suicide.Poor guy,he should be alive by now if wasn’t let down by a tramp”the sheriff replied.

“Oh..but are you sure that we are talking about the same Barry?...umm but he was here yesterday."said the confused writer.

"I'm talking about the same Barry,I think you need help..."said the sheriff.

"Oh god...I'm fine,I don't need any help."Cudi began to feel different about the situation.Too many questions appears on her mind.

All this time Barry has been dead,but who taught Cudi to ride the bicycle?Who's the man that has been Cudi's inspiration....is he the dead Barry or a guy who uses Barry's identity?

I really want to end this at the 5th part but new ideas keep flashing....so there will be the 6th.
Patience is power okay.I really love you guys <3

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Friday, February 24, 2012 @ 4:27 PM  |  16 Comment(s)


"Barry's Bicycle underwater"

Cudi: Sounds interesting,hmm Why you never change your clothes ?And the weird thing is, I can’t smell anything from you although you wear the same thing every day and for a soon-to-be owner of Deaver’s Bicycle you must be having a lot of money for new clothes.

Barry: These are the only ones I have,I don’t have a good relationship with my dad after my mom left the family.I think he would sell the shop anyway.

Cudi: I’m very sorry to hear that,….but your dad wouldn’t do that. Trust me he loves you and you’re lucky because you have a dad.Okay next question is, what do you want to do before you die?

Barry: Hmm let see,travelling to places I never been to, like Idaho or Iowa maybe Europe to see the different world ,culture and people.

Cudi:If you had one wish,what could it be?

Barry: I want to change my name,from Deaver into Beaver so I can swim well like a beaver.Hahahaha

Cudi:Names can’t change your skills or personality.It  depends on yourself not  with names.What is the most stupid thing that you ever done in your life?

Barry: I like this question, the most stupid thing that I ever done is I cycled a bicycle underwater. I was cycling underwater because of a girl that wants to break up with me. 1 night,I made my dream came true,I like to imagine that my bicycle can fly like the movie E.T when I was a boy.So I climbed this bridge with my bicycle and jumped .I hold my breath till I can’t hold it no more ,I never know how to swim .If I could swim at that time,I should be enjoying myself spending the rest of my life with a girl like you.

Cudi: Haha,you think that I would fall for that story?That is a great story. You should be a writer too,I bet the ladies would be your biggest fans .Looks like I have to get back to the cabin, I only got almost 4 weeks left to finish my novel.Thanks Barry for everything I’ll see you around.

Barry: It’s up to you whether to believe it or not,wait before you go.I would like you to keep this button for me.The Button from my red plaid shirt that has been your biggest question.This is the only thing that I could give to you right now.

Cudi: This is getting weird,well okay I’ll keep it then. A token of memories from Barry Deaver,Bye Barry take care.Talk to your dad will you?He loves you trust me.

Barry: I wish I could Cudi,I wish I could…Goodbye Cudi and whatever you do,just don’t give up okay? Appreciate your life, don’t waste your life like I did.So long my friend the stranger from the big apple. Farewell.

Cudi found that Barry acted strange that morning,but she thought it might be his true nature to be weird at all times.She cycled her way up the hill where her rented cabin is, then she parked Vigdis at the porch.She waited outside for a while,but suddenly it was raining heavily.From a bright sunny day to a very gloomy day in a middle of summer that supposed to be warm turned cold for a moment.Terri made chicken sandwiches for lunch,she’s been typing Cudi’s work all morning.

450 pages,only 50 more pages to go,just like before…writing the 50th page is going to be different this time.A new kind of ending will end the novel,unlike her previous novels that never has a perfect ending.”Lies brings fake happiness,reality brings real pain” that was Cudi’s favourite quote for an ending.This new novel must have another kind of ending ,a happy ending ? or just leave hanging…

Barry's Childhood dream to fly like E.T


The 5th part is tomorrow :D 25/2/2012.

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@ 9:24 AM  |  7 Comment(s)


Cudi made it to the cabin and helped Terri to prepare dinner.Mashed potatoes and Mushroom Soup for dinner,simple but that kept them full until they felt like a giant meatball.Their tummy meters showed the red alert for being too full.Cudi felt that she needed to finish her 50th page no matter how hard it could be and so she gets back on her writing desk.

"It's a terror for John and Peter after they made their great escape from the tower of doom.The cat lady saw them....." the last piece that Cudi wrote earlier in the morning.

Suddenly,Barry's last words were lingering in her mind "You can't keep yourself 'Cycling' that way forever,I'll be glad to help you".She kept thinking about Vigdis,all this time she could be asking for almost anything but why Vigdis?Why she wanted a bicycle that has been her buried wish for years?That's it! Cudi started to write a new kind of story,a story that never have been "Novelled" before.That is The Writer and her Bicycle!

 Her Parker pen were dancing on 10 pieces of papers that night.Barry's last words are her missing notes of a symphony,thanks to Vigdis,the vibrant red bicycle.Cudi managed to finish her last sentence before going to bed and decided to meet Barry tomorrow,for her first lesson and also to finish her novel.She felt that Vigdis has helped her a lot.All because of Vigdis and her weakness,she can start writing a novel that might win for Best Writer Award or even mentioned as New York Times bestselling novel.

Night says goodbye,morning says hi.A sunny ray gleamed upon Cudi's window to wake her up but she still didn't move a muscle.The bed is married to Cudi,but the smell of Terri's pancakes and maple sauce syrup finally separates them.She puts her bunny slippers on and went downstairs.

Cudi: Morning Terri Cherry


Terri: Good morning Miss Cudi,you look a little tired you must be working all night.How was it?


Cudi:I did work all night but it seems to be worth it.I wrote a whole new story! 10 pages of them last night and looks like we both have a lot of work to do.By the way,where's Vigdis?I thought I brought Vigdis inside


Terri: I parked Vigdis at the porch,the living room is too small for the three of us.


Cudi: Oh well,as long there's a roof Vigdis will be fine,you're right this cabin is too small maybe we should go somewhere else next year,Palm Springs might be nice.

Cudi enjoyed 5 pieces of Terri's pancakes and a cup of joe brightened her morning.Last night mashed potatoes and mushroom soup has been fully digested in 4 hours,Cudi has quite a big appetite.Then she remembered her date with Vigdis and Barry,so she took a quick bath,puts on her sweats and Nike kicks. She pushes Vigdis until where she met Barry,The Swanwick  Lake Bridge.

Barry: Morning grumpy Cudi,I thought you wouldn't be interested with my offer.


Cudi: Fine,I admit it! I can't ride a bicycle,but I am here to learn and this is the first time that I trusted a stranger who wear the same clothes like yesterday to help me.


Barry: See,you can't lie to a guy that has been a son of a bicycle store owner.Besides we are all strangers at first and then become friends.I thought a writer like you would be smart enough to think about that,Messer.


Cudi: Okay Mr Smartypants,first of all I wrote about the ugly reality that opened millions of eyes that experience betrayals in their life and I prove to the world that life isn't a movie to be scripted to have happy endings.Liars,backstabbers,betrayal and even strangers.Enough! Let's start the first lesson.

They start their first lesson that morning near a foxtail field.Barry taught Cudi with full attention and patience.He caught her before she gets her first fall,pushing Vigdis's back to help her to balance herself and that went well for almost two weeks. Cudi managed to record her bicycle lesson with Barry in 300 pages after she returns to her cabin in every afternoon for the last 14 days and she spends her evening and night on her writing desk.She wrote about Barry and his patience to teach her to ride the bicycle and all the places they went for practice such as the abandoned the old man Peabody's farm.She changed Barry's name into Bruce,and changed her name into Laura in her novel.

Foxtail Field

Terri noticed that Cudi has changed her way of writing,from a writer who mostly wrote about the dark side of people's life turns into an "Indie" writer.She has no idea what happened to her boss but she thinks that it is a good time for Cudi to start enjoying her life.Terri didn't know that "Bruce" and "Laura" actually exists in the real world,she thought it might be Cudi's best imaginary characters.Cudi never tells whom she met every morning to Terri.She's afraid that Terri would know about her weakness,so she kept the secret between Barry and Vigdis.

On the 16th morning,Cudi finally can ride Vigdis without Barry's help,so she cycles all the way down the hill from the cabin until the bridge.Barry was sitting on the bench wearing the same old red plaid shirt and seasoned coloured jeans.

Barry: Impressive,looks like you wont be needing me anymore.Messer is not a mess and grumpy Cudi becomes happy Cudi.


Cudi: Haha,thanks for teaching me to ride Vigdis,without you I might be 'cycling' like I used to.


Barry: You helped yourself,I'm just a friend who just watched and be there when needed.Since you can ride Vigdis on your own,How about we play a game that rhymes with "You asked for it".You can ask whatever you like and I answer all your questions But the questions must be about me.Not about why is the sky is blue? or why is the grass is green?Just ask what do you want to know about me.


I will be working on the iv part. :D Thx for reading.

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Thursday, February 23, 2012 @ 4:31 PM  |  11 Comment(s)


Terri got Cudi a red bicycle from town,and it wasn't a new model.It is a vintage bicycle with the 60's touch.VIGDIS is the name,made with pure leather seat and a weaved wicker basket.The vibrant red coated metal excites Cudi.She never actually owns a bicycle before,Vigdis is her first bicycle and Terri felt so happy when Cudi seems to love the bicycle.

Terri didn't know that it was Cudi's first bicycle,and the fact is Cudi never knows how to ride a one!
The bicycle idea just come out from her mind,it was a long time wish.A wish that has never been granted,a wish from an orphan who lives in a house with 12 children and supervised by a very strict care taker.Vigdis completes her desire,it was Vigdis...her missing puzzle piece.

Cudi waited for Terri to get inside the cabin,she didn't want Terri to know that she can't ride a bicycle.It would be such a shame because Terri always looks up to Cudi.She always been perfect in Terri's hazel eyes.For 3 years,they spend their time together.Every spring,every summer,every autumn and every winter.365 days a year and almost reached 366 days....2012.Cudi is a very secretive person,she never shares her personal life with Terri although they been living with each other for such a long time.

"I think I better get inside,I need to rest for a while and you should go for a ride.The sun looks happy today and so do you,I'm preparing dinner tonight."said Terri.

"Finally!alone....at last"Cudi sighed.She pushes Vigdis slowly until 40 metres away from the cabin,she gets on Vigdis,she puts her left foot on the pedal and her right foot pushes the ground so it almost look like that she actually cycles from far.

She got her left foot on the pedal,
Pushing the ground on flower petals,
With her new shining metal,
Oh she looks happy,
Got Vigdis from Terri,
Like a wish granted by a fairy,
Thank you Terri from me,Cudi.

She kept pushing the ground with her right foot until she made it to a bridge,The Swanwick Lake Bridge.Cudi parked Vigdis near a bench,the atmosphere is very calming but still she can't get herself thinking a perfect climax for her novel."What if I stand up on the beam?Maybe my head will go woo for ideas"her little heart whispered.So she climbed over the bridge beam,and spreads out her hands  in the air imagining a scene from Titanic.Suddenly a male voice featured in her "I'm the king of the world" moment but it wasn't Leonardo Dicaprio's voice,but it belongs to a guy who wears a red plaid shirt and a pair of seasoned coloured jeans saying "Don't do it!" The Conversation continues,

Guy: Don't do it! It wouldn't be worth it.You deserve better than him!


Cudi: I'm sorry who are you? Do I know you? Go away I don't talk to strangers.


Guy: You just did,talking to an alien like me.Must be a lady from the big apple city coming down to the orange county,who gets sick of her life and wanted to suicide.


Cudi: Suicide?I'm not here to suicide,I got a successful career and actually try to get away from my "Father of Time" editor.He's a pain in the neck! And yes,I'm from the big apple city that doesn't grow apples and coming to the orange county that actually grows oranges.


Guy: Whoa! So you're the writer who rented the Howard's family cabin on that hill.Well,I'm Barry Deaver,nice to meet you Lady From The Big Apple City.Nice bike you got there,your sister just purchased it from my dad.Deaver Bicycles at your service.


Cudi: I'm Cudi,Cudi Messer.That's Terri she's not my sister,she's my assistant.So your dad owns a bicycle store,running a family business?


Guy: Umm,soon I guess.Are you going to stand up there forever,or you need a hand to get down?


Cudi: Yes please,I need to get down and return to the cabin before sunset.


Barry helped Cudi to get off the bridge beam,she immediately gets on Vigdis and hoping that Barry would get away from there soon.She waited for Barry to return first but he kept staring at her.


Barry: I never saw anyone that rides a bike like you


Cudi: My knee got injured a long time ago,so I can't cycle like normal people can.


Barry: Oh,I see but I wonder how can you climbed up the bridge if your knee is injured?


Cudi didn't answer,she ignores Barry and kept pushing her right foot on the ground like she did to get to the bridge.Barry knew that Cudi was lying so he offers himself to help.

"You can't keep yourself 'Cycling' that way forever,I'll be glad to help you if you are interested.Meet me tomorrow here,first thing in the morning.Grumpy Cudi Messer is in a mess....."

 
"Howard's Family Cabin"
*Illustration Purpose*

*Should I start writing the 3rd part?or....."
Big Apple City = New York City
Orange County= California

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Wednesday, February 22, 2012 @ 6:14 PM  |  23 Comment(s)


Another original fiction story by Liselle Moncherie

"Ugh! This is madness!"said Cudi Messer,she ripped off her work page by page.She's been working all day to finish her 50th page of her latest novel.Apparently that she could not continue to write anymore. She tried everything to get inspired,she ran outside the cabin yard barefooted,climbing trees and she even shout out loud to express her anger.Nothing seems to be working,and so she sunk herself on the sofa and stare at the old wooden ceiling.

"You only got 2 months left to finish this,I expect your novel to be more than just 500 pages,it's a message from Roger,your editor Miss Cudi." her assistant Terri told her.Roger is Cudi's editor and also her publisher,he is a very pushy guy and for a guy who owns a Patek Philippe watch,time is everything for him.Roger Kingsley is the only person who occupied Cudi's answer machine for almost every 4 hours a day."If you can't do it,I will find someone else that is far better than you!", his last message was recorded for the day.

"I sure hate this guy,he kept saying that for 3 years and pretend that it was all a joke after my novels got million hits.I need a break,.......Terri help me!" Cudi cried.

"Why don't you go out for a while?after all it's the middle of summer and the country environment can be really inspiring."Terri suggested.

"Hmm,Terri get me a bicycle,Cudi Messer is going to cycle her way to the road of inspiration!"a sentence came out from a very enthusiastic young writer.

Cudi Messer is a 23 year old writer who started writing at the age of 10.She won every single writing competition that was held by the school,she was truly gifted.Cudi doesn't like to type,she mostly uses her handwriting to write the best stories.She said that she likes to touch her handwriting to feel satisfied with her work.Terri has to do all her typing after she finishes writing a page for each novels.Currently she wrote almost 4 novels and all the typing work were done by Terri,her most trusted companion.

To Be Continued.......if the story isn't boring for you. XD

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@ 10:11 AM  |  25 Comment(s)

Fluffy's Favourite sleeping spot!

Curiosity Kills The Cat,and it did kill my Cat Alphonso aka Poncho aka Fluffy.
Cause of death?Poisoned egg that has been threw by a moron who doesn't know how to throw garbage in a garbage bin. I saw the moron threw many things outside her windows including egg shells,I guess if I hadn't the patience I would probably have forced her to eat the egg that she threw to Fluffy!

I'm sorry to write about this,I'm not being offensive but because of her...my cat dies.
How I met Fluffy?
21 November 2009,it was raining heavily for hours.I heard a kitten "Meow" but I switched off my ears for a while. Maghrib went by and the kitten still cried outside the off button for my ears seemed to be malfunctioning so I went to see what could possibly be the problem.Then I saw fluffy white kitten shivering in a drain with mud all over its body,I quickly grabbed an old towel to wrap it and brought it inside.I got Fluffy's first scratch! Chill Fluffy I did save you!

Fluffy turn out to be an expensive kitten,it has blue eyes and puffy white fur.It's a mix of a siamese cat and persian.No wonder it looks different.On that day I decided to keep Fluffy,I feed him wash his fave "investment" spots.....<----a very tough job to clean the kitchen.Every weekends,Fluffy used to go "swimming" with me,and I gave him a special shampoo.Whiskers Cat Shampoo~

I learnt many things from Fluffy....The meaning of true love.Everywhere I go, a little Fluffy ball would follow me...even when I went to the toilet.It will wait for me by the door.How I miss my Fluffy...but now..all those good times "poofed" away,just a blink of an eye...Fluffy left me broken,shattered....my eyes are raining.I promise to myself that I will find another cat that look exactly like Fluffy although no other cat can replace my one true love.......Alphonso.

You always be in my heart....

Thx to Lisa for Tagging me for the contest Gelagat Anak Bulus Ku,If Fluffy is still alive.I would probably be the first who will send the video! Huhu :'(



@ 8:29 AM  |  15 Comment(s)



I try to remember what have I achieved in my entire 17 1/2 years of my life,somehow I manage to summarised  that most of my life spent on sleeping. I'm not a family of bears or squirrels with their hibernation,or maybe I belong to live with Yogi Bear and Bubu :P,stealing picnic basket for food? Nevermind~


Whenever there's a speech going on,my eyes just fall like a theater curtain that falls after a show.It's like "Thank you" and "Good Night everyone,see you on the next show"......and ZzZzzz

My sleeping Chronology "The Chronicles of Firzanah"<----Nice title?

In 2008,the Form 2 Science Lab.
The Cornea of the eye....and Iris....and retina where blind spot is.... "Oh kawan kita ada yang tdo,di belakang" said my former science teacher.

2 Jabir Classroom,afternoon preparation class.
"Tulah,kerja pagi tido,tghari tido,malam dah susah nak tido" said my former bestfriend.

I used to stay up at night with her finishing homework,but the bed is always tempting calling us to sleep "Come at me,I'm so soft and fluffy".Soft? Too far from softness but nearest to hard solid,and it' never been changed from 1996....a girl just doodled on the mattress "Anonymous was here 1996"...I saw it when I want to change the bedspread...eeeerr >.<

In 2009,Form 3 Science Lab,
The stamen of the flower is......"Firzanah,tolong basuh muka"

Okay....mostly I fell asleep during Science class,I don't know why.... but science is my second favourite subject besides English.My science isn't bad I got A for PMR,hehe thanks to all the teachers that taught with patience I got 6 A's for PMR. 6 is always my number,I was born on the 6th June 1994 on 6.28 pm.
666<----The omen who sleeps a lot.

2010,Physics Lab.
The momentum of.......ZzzZZzz<-----The momentum of Sleeping is 0
That's why I sucks at Physics

Biology Lab,
Scurvy is lack of....vitamin ZzZzz<----Deficiency of Vitamin Z causes optimum tiredness.

2011,Physics lab.
The longitudinal wave is the.... Zzzzz<---------Zig Zag wave,no korean wave or Bieber wave.

Chemistry class? I never fell asleep during chemistry because the teacher never actually be there to teach.Sorry but that's the truth that you can deny Mr X.I depend 100 % on tuition classes for Chemistry.
Thank god the Chemistry teacher that taught me in tuition classes is very good in teaching so I understand every lesson he taught me.Mr Hasan the Honorable!

So that's my chronology of Sleepiness....now after finish school.My forehead is always duplicating the keyboard...not entire the entire keyboard just a few alphabets at my mom's office.Dreams give new ideas,the power of dreams!







This post is related to Hit The Un-Nerd Button.





Tuesday, February 21, 2012 @ 6:16 PM  |  14 Comment(s)


It's a lie if you never play hide and seek in your entire life *unless you don't have anyone to play with*.Hide and seek is the most thrilling game for every children in the universe!<----Aliens Children are better with hiding that's why NASA send the great seekers to find them heee :3

Being the eldest is always an advantage,my brother always become my first and the last victim for almost anything.Every game we play,he ends up crying to my mom....dude,dad says life is a gamble so play nice :P.Don't take it wrong...dad found that proverb from....a song I think.

Snakes and Ladders,Chess,Scrabble.....You're looking at a winner bro.Enough with my score board...I didn't get any trophy for winning,and I really hate to pretend I lost in a certain game in order to make my brother happy.....and to stop him from leaking water.<----those were long time ago,we both grown mature :P

Back to the Hide and Seek game,my brother always follow my orders "I hide and you seek".Even though he's 4 at that moment he done a good job with reading and counting.I'm an expert with hiding and he always gives up early when he couldn't find me.Hehehehe your sister is a "Chameleon". I don't have extraordinary powers to change like a Chameleon but I have a few good tricks to become a Chameleon for a better Camouflaging <-----Disguise

My fave hiding tricks and spots:

1. The wardrobe but I always make sure that the clothes hanging covers me.

2.Pile of unfolded clothes,mom always busy with her work and she didn't have the time to do chores so
  I "Help" her by using the unfolded clothes wisely.

3. Under the giant "Tudung Saji" .This actually works!

Thx Mr Goo! Never under estimate the Epic Power of "Tudung Saji"


There's a story behind the 3rd trick.It was Raya season and my parents took me to my grandma's house.My brother couldn't walk or talk yet.I was about 4  and my cousin is a year older than me asked me to play hide and seek with him.He lost the rock,paper and scissors mini game......so he will seek me!

When he started counting I ran to every single place but all of them were occupied with stuff so I ran to the kitchen,climbed a chair of a dining table and hid under the giant "Tudung Saji".As I suspected he could never find me so I waited........and waited...and fast asleep.

Time got wings,so time flies.My parents were worried,they couldn't find me everywhere.My relatives held a search party<---Let's get it started  woo hoo!
They looked for me almost everywhere but still there are no sign of success

Before they called the whole village,my aunt went home to cook.When she reached the kitchen and lifted the "Tudung Saji" and Tada! I'm her "meal"! Luckily none of my relatives are cannibals,hehehe :P.
She told everyone that I was sleeping under the "Tudung Saji" the whole time.

See I told you I'm a mischief wasn't I? I'm a pro *In hiding only*.Does anyone remember SPY KID Movies?I always imagine that there's a another secret room or a portal in wardrobes.My ambition was to be a spy when I was 8.Now,the most appropriate career for me is writing for children might be just right!

A secret baby room in this cupboard!
Credits to Mr Goo.

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Monday, February 20, 2012 @ 11:43 PM  |  23 Comment(s)


This entire story is a fiction coming out from Liselle Moncherie's head.
Similarities to a person's life or to a real event is totally coincidental.

The story begins in a fancy restaurant,where all prestigious meals are being served. Long-nosed waiters with penguin coats wearing super shiny shoes that can give a reflection of their own face.In the kitchen,there is a chef named Stuart Stew.He inherit his father's nature gift,and that is cooking! 


His father,grandfather,great grandfather and great great....ancestors have their own secret recipe of making stews and that's why their family name is STEW!


Chicken Stew,Meat Stew,Beef Stew you name it and he will "dew" it.One day,there was an event going on at the restaurant,a homecoming event of a college graduate after he graduated and return home.His parents booked the whole restaurant.Stuart cooked the restaurant's signature meal "Stew-art".Everyone love his stew,although Stuart owns the restaurant but it is a must for Stuart to cook his own dishes because originality is important.He did not want other people to know about his family secret formula. 


Chemical X thus The Ultimate Stews were born! Using their special  super attraction Sugar,Salt and Spice have dedicated their lives to become the tastiest stews!<----Powerpuff Stew?


While he asked the waiters to serve the guests,a girl caught his eyes.From Scale 1 to 10 she is definitely 20! She has rosy cheeks,blue eyes and a very sweet smile.She is the most beautiful person that Stuart ever seen in his life besides his mother.Stuart never actually been to the outside world,he spend most of his life in his kitchen.His friends are Mr Spatulas,pots,pans,ovens and all the cooking utensils that you can ever imagine.


It is love at the first sight for Stuart,the girl turns out to be the graduated college boy sister.Her name is Felise Chandler,she is a successful lawyer working at one of the prestigious firm in the city.Stuart owns a prestigious restaurant and she works in a prestigious law firm,not a really big difference after all.
Is it now or never for Stuart,he wanted to make the first move.He walked slowly to Felise Chandler's table and suddenly things "Paused" for a while when Stuart asked Felise:


"With this onion ring that is used to be the turkey's topping...I ask you to be mine"
Felise was shocked,no man ever dare to express their feelings towards her after she's being known as "Fierce Felise",but this guy Stuart,might bring some changes to her life.Her heart melts like a melted butter.Stuart is a handsome chef, from 1 to 10 he can be considered as 15 but he just spend too much time dating with his kitchen.


"Yes,I do....whether it's an onion ring or a gold ring.I would be saying Yes if you promise that you will love me and accept the way I am and I will accept and love the way you are!" Felise replied.


Her parents were still in the "Freezing" state although the restaurant's air conditioners were not so cold.From a homecoming party to an engagement night,2 celebrations at a time.The guests were cheering! They felt happy for the couple although they both met less than an hour.Felise's family thought that it is the right time for Felise to get married,she is not getting any younger and so does Stuart.


A wedding took place,and they were pronounced as husband and wife but guess what is on Felise's finger,a 24 carat diamond ring from Stuart.Not an onion ring and so Felise became Mrs Stew,the legacy of the Stew family goes on.


~The End~

It's my first romantic story on my blog,I need reviews from you guys and thanks for reading :)
Ps: I De-Spice Cooking is a total spin off from this story XD

I would like to take this opportunity to thank Shafiq for writing about me,he is a Malay English Blogger and be sure to check out his blog :D.



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